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英语二级考试作文范文:看图片编故事
评论对象： 全脑通 | 2009/10/12 12:22:45
评论言论： ［题目要求］请根据下列图画编一个小故事，描述图中所发生的事情，字数在100词左右：
1、某天两个小学生在放学回家的路上；
2、其他情节根据图画所示自编；
要求：故事必须包括所有4幅图画的内容，人名必须用xiao lan and xiao
ming、其他细节如时间、地点等可以自己酌情增加，但文章前后应一致，符合逻辑，内容连贯，语言通顺。
［参考范文］
one day, xiao lan and xiao ming went back home together. they were laughting
and talking after a whole day in the school.suddenly, xiao ming saw a bird in a
tree. no sooner had xiao lan stopped him than xiao ming picked up a stone and
threw it at the bird, the bird was badly hurt and fell off the tree. xiao lan
flet so sorry that tears rolled down her cheeks and said, "i won’t be your good
friend any more if you hurt a bird again." just then an old man came uo to them
and told xiao ming not to kill birds again. the old man then went on
saying,"your young pioneers should protect animals and the enviroment. birds are
friends of mankind."
xiao ming felt ashamed and nodded his head. he said to the old man that he
would never forget what he had told him.
评论对象： 全脑通 | 2009/10/12 12:22:45
评论言论： ［题目要求］请根据下列图画编一个小故事，描述图中所发生的事情，字数在100词左右：
1、某天两个小学生在放学回家的路上；
2、其他情节根据图画所示自编；
要求：故事必须包括所有4幅图画的内容，人名必须用xiao lan and xiao
ming、其他细节如时间、地点等可以自己酌情增加，但文章前后应一致，符合逻辑，内容连贯，语言通顺。
［参考范文］
one day, xiao lan and xiao ming went back home together. they were laughting
and talking after a whole day in the school.suddenly, xiao ming saw a bird in a
tree. no sooner had xiao lan stopped him than xiao ming picked up a stone and
threw it at the bird, the bird was badly hurt and fell off the tree. xiao lan
flet so sorry that tears rolled down her cheeks and said, "i won’t be your good
friend any more if you hurt a bird again." just then an old man came uo to them
and told xiao ming not to kill birds again. the old man then went on
saying,"your young pioneers should protect animals and the enviroment. birds are
friends of mankind."
xiao ming felt ashamed and nodded his head. he said to the old man that he
would never forget what he had told him.